Friday, 28 July 2017

Digging deeper


We are learning to dig deeper and use words that are more interesting in our writing.

First i made a simple sentence.  

Next i made the sentence bigger and better. 

Last i made it more interesting.  

The most hardest part was when I had to think of a simple sentence.

Next time I will use a thesaurus for more interesting words.

After that I did a  digging deeper story on my chrome book.

First I did the background.

Next I added shapes to make the dirt and pictures for the sun,grass and rainbows.

Last I made the holes so I could copy my story from my book and type it onto my chrome book.

The most fun part was when I got to do the google drawing. 

Next time I might do it more different to the other people in class. 

Wednesday, 26 July 2017

WALT visualise what we are reading

Title: reading responses
Journal: Poi
SJ Nov,2014. L2.
Maia is a girl that does not like her poi because it was lopsided,the taura was loose and one of the hukahuka had fallen off. There was an hole in the other poi and when she put her finger in it the foam came out and she wanted to quit
kapa haka.Then the principal Mr Hayward ask her if she wanted to help mrs taiapa a teacher at their school make pois for their school kapa haka team.

Their school kapa haka team was going to a festival in two weeks. The next day during lunch maia went to help the teacher Miss Taiapa make the pois. They had to make sixty-five pois. Their school colours were blue and red. They used plastic bags,wool and foam to make them. On  the festival day maia got to go with the kapa haka team to the festival. And Mrs waru ask her to accept their group’s prize for best poi.

Monday, 3 July 2017

WALT find better synonyms to make our writing more interesting.

My Word Bank
WALT find better synonyms to make our writing more interesting

  • Make a copy in your writing folder.
  • Rename it.

Verb from the poem
Synonym for that verb
My mum is tall
The night is dark.
My nan’s dog is fluffy.
The dark is frightening.
My sister thought she was scary.
My cousin can be weird.
The idea of flying was terrifying.
When i was a baby i liked crawling.